Feedback for my cut out animation

The things that people liked most about the animation was that they way it had been designed with the fruit, it is similar to the game that I took inspiration from, but instead I used a hand that was able to be seen on screen so it looked as if you were looking down on someone playing the game. 

Some of the things that people said could be improved we’re the lighting as it is a little bit dark, I can agree with this as I know that it could do with being lit up. Also someone said that you could see where the paper joins together, I think is shows up because the paper that I used for my background got folded away, but I still decided to use it, so I could have used another piece of paper to avoid this.

 When I asked who the animation was aimed at the responses show that it is primarily aimed at everyone, which is a good thing. As I know that any future animations that I may make, I can look back at this one and know that this sort of animation appeals to everyone.

I lastly asked people to rate this animation on a scale from one to ten and the overall results show that it is rated at a 6.5, which is fair, as the issues with the lighting and the background lets it down.

Feedback for my 3D animation

These are the responses that I got back for my 3D animation.

The things that people liked most about the animation was that they way it had been designed with the food instead of using building blocks or drawings. I have to agree with these responses, as I thought that using food would be something different and a lot of thought went into what foods I could use.

Some of the things that people said could be improved we’re the lighting and the fact that it was a little bit out of focus, I agree with both of these things, it was a little bit dark and the final product did look a little grainy, so if I was to do this animation again, I would make sure that it was lit light enough and it was a bit more in focus.

When I asked who the animation was aimed at the responses show that it is primarily aimed at everyone, which is a good thing. As I know that any future animations that I may make, I can look back at this one and know that this sort of animation appeals to everyone.

I lastly asked people to rate this animation on a scale from one to ten and the overall results show that it is rated at a 7, which is fair, as the issues with the lighting and the focus of the animation its self lets it down.